All right. I slept on it, and read all of them again, and I had to go with Steff. She just does slice-of-life so well it's like being there. In the end, I felt like I spent a weekend at the Corrigans' house. And who doesn't love a little Radioactive Vulcan Zombies II?
I wanted to vote for MF because I love Noah Cutler, the banter in the den was funny and adult and reminded me of the guys I grew up around thanks to my dad's job -- rough seafaring types, though I guess in this case they'd be spacefaring types. I also really loved how the Kestrel became another character in that piece.
I wanted to vote for gojirob because I thought he did a terrific job providing a cross-section of ordinary life all over the ship, and Chekov made me giggle out loud with his sniping about the plant, and even though I was lost by the end since I haven't read Ancient Destroyer, I liked all the dialogue very much.
In the end, though, I just had to go for Steff. Sorry, MF and gojirob! This was such a tough one I didn't want to vote at all. Great job, everyone!